Projects-Dev's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Go Pico!!]

The blast shading on the left-side gun is behind the gun, and you seemed very confused on whether you wanted a simple dark line-art, or colored as I see the hand on the right having both which defies the rest of the piece. The shading and lighting such as the finger lines and neck could be sharpened with an eraser.

If all of those were present, it would've been a 4 to 4.5 stars from me

jaxinabox responds:

thank you very much for the feedback!!

yea, i'll take that in mind with my next drawings.

[Domino Reference Sheet]

feels a bit rushed on the shade, but a very lovely character concept sheet. Way more welcoming with the custom fonts, background, and icons than I see in other concepts (The items on the right such as the football seem very rushed however.)

AtomicHamzter responds:

thanks for the feedback!! and yeah, i never really drew a soccer ball before, so i just scribbled the pentagons lol

[Angel kills Peter Griffin]

I have reasons to believe It's a trend to kill Peter nowadays. Amazing work on Angel, It'd be a 5 star from me if Peter's character was just as good

Onemanshowoff responds:

It's a trend?

[Cherry n Isabelle]

Isabelle's expression is slightly dazed/tired, and the hips feel a tad too big. Also, cherry's tail is cut-off in the middle-left, and isabelle's hair still has some sketch-lines to it. Overall though, not too bad

Beefpattiparty responds:

Thank you for the critique! 💖

[Red OC]

I remember when I was in these phase of shading. Overusing a soft low-flow brush. There is magic in confident, strong shadows. I learned that a couple months afterwards

Amilcarasd2 responds:

Hmm ... It's true, I'm still looking for a stronger way to make shadows, but also in a "Subtle" way that the airbrush brush gives, I come from pure NSFW and I still need to learn how to make textures, but thanks for the constructive criticism , I also see that you draw cool (and that the only thing you have uploaded is something from 2018)

[Cool gf]

Love the stylization you have going on, however it feels like she's bending backwards a tad too much. Her hip and her abdomen are legit about 10 inches apart

Woolen-Circle responds:

lmao you aren't wrong XD but thanks for the feedback!

[Happy 6th Anniversary Crypt of the Necrodancer]

pretty alright. the first image's knees though look off however, and the last two are a bit repetitive with the background. what your lacking is perhaps a slight improvement on the overall shading and lighting. Tackling textures is next, though I do get that achieving that might ruin the cartoony look you're going for

4thNoah responds:

mayb, thank you for commenting

[HORSIEROLLLLLL]

did not know you can do that on flash

[Ruv & Sarvente]

the glitter on her abdomen is a off-putting considering the rest of her skin isn't like that. other than that, good job!

I actually got S rank on all, and A rank on her final form

[Shar Secret Santa]

waiting to see someone say "I wish I was that cat"