Projects-Dev's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[beat the drum]

you can draw on Powerpoint? o.0

regardless, needs sharpening with an eraser and arms are too long again (nice self-portrait though)

Troisnyx responds:

1) Yes, you can draw on (full) PowerPoint. You'd need to plug in a tablet before then opening the software to unlock the Draw function.

2) I could do to use a thinner pen. Erasers work very differently on PowerPoint.

3) That's my actual arm span you're talking about.

[Rainy Day]

considering rain is hitting the outsiders, I'd expect an amplification in lighting in certain areas not covered under the umbrella. Regardless however, there's a big lack of details and folds on the girls inside the shop in comparison to the ones outside in the rain.

Ace perspective/background though. You could've amplified this by making rain accumulate/drop in larger quantities in-front of the store

(The gator's tail should have a few droplets of rim-lighting from the store light hitting its wet tail, thus reflecting towards the camera aka us)

edit: considering how bright the store is, if there WERE droplet reflections I'd expect you to meddle with much lighter values for them, almost completely white as it's based on the store's lighting

Skoops responds:

Thanks for the thoughtful critique. Good point about things getting more reflective as they get more wet; I'm definitely going to keep that in mind next time.

[bf but if he was taller]

you missed a pixel there

NecromancerCC responds:

BRUH Give it the genuine rating

[BF]

you missed a few pixels there

NecromancerCC responds:

Thanks for letting me know

[My first pixel art]

it's actually "recommended" to use a mouse when drawing pixel, soooooo.

NecromancerCC responds:

Bruv, Stop disliking my art cuz You're mad at me for some shit Give it it's genuine rating

[Cassandra's Crush]

that got a good chuckle out of me

DEEPFRIEDFLESH responds:

glad to hear

[Friends at Mikey's Pizza]

2 characters facing a complete 90 degree is a bit of a turn-off, but drawing so many is definitely a challenge deserving of applause.

TIGZON responds:

I see your point.
Thanks for the compliment

[tasty melon]

just needs a solid shape for the plate, seeds, and more textures. (Nice choice of purple background on an orange melon)

olskoo responds:

lol, the plate is weird shaped, right?

[Solis (Clairvoyager)]

try not to make your characters face directly onto the camera. You'll immediately see they'll look more natural

(Most of your portfolio they're looking dead-center on the camera)

immunepanda responds:

Thanks for the tip! I'll take that into consideration, these are more just concept ideas and whatnot.